Well it all started on the lucky lucky lucky Friday the 11Th of March. I woke up with extremely happiness on that day. I was such in a rush on doing everything before getting to school. I was keep telling the people I live with IT WAS THE DAY repeating it again and again. Then they all was keep telling me what what what was the day then I shouted in happiness THE TRIP TO THE BIG BANG SCIENCE SHOW! They all reapplied tome so what well it is quiet good but why are you that happy about it. Then I reapplied angrily (not really) Do you know who is taking us? who? The famous famous famous teacher in the world that is MR SLOAN!
So first we was waiting the train to come it was fainily here. so firstly we went on the overground train to stratford. Then we went to Jubilee to canning tower and from that we took the DLR (witch has no driver) to somewhere near to canary wharf so after that really tiering jorney we was THERE holly god we was now acsully there.
So what we did there first is Mr Sloan went to get us a thing to put on our neak that is for when we get lost we can take it to the lady that works in the reception.They will know that we are from this school and bla bla bla so then they will make sure we are not lost. Then we magically stepped in the drreeeaaaammmm! What we done first in the dream is we saw a racing track with little cars. What you have to do is you can choose who you want to race so I raced with Hulya and I WON hehehehe.
Then we went to the chocolate place. What we had to do is get chocolate and melt it and then stick them together and make a tower. It was fun and dilisous because then they gave us some chocolate to eat. Then we went to do our own snot. After wads we went to lunch after lunch we went toilet and then we went to watch wallace and groimit’s world of inventions. We was talking about wallace and then how to build his steam chair. Then we went to the take photos with wallace. After a while we went to punks science I really enjoyed the part when Mr Sloan danced hahahahha it was funny. Then We staqrted are jorney back again.
From Aycan
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well done Aycan you have done really well in your recount I really enjoyed reading it.
Aycan this is so nice I can’t belive it it’s just so nice but I think you should check
through your work and the second thing is to not write to much capitaled letered
words and the third thing is CHECK THROUGH YOUR WWWOOOOORRRRKK!!!!!!
WOW Aycan, did you cheat by getting somone to do it for you?. I cant belive you actually wrote that AMAZING peice of writing.
Aycan thats really good and there are nice descriptive use of words, there are connectives, but there is just one little thing. When you’re using 3 of the same words, you have to put commas between it. I am going give you 9/10 for your work.
Aycan thats really good and there are nice descriptive use of words, there are connectives, but there is just one little thing. When you’re using 3 of the same words, you have to put commas between it. I am going give you 9/10 for your work. Well done.
Aycan – I can’t believe you got chocolate!! You also had a brilliant day which you have reported here! Well done!