The big bang fair by Cheyenne.

When I woke up in the morning I was so excited about going to school, Year 5 was going on a trip to no other then the Big Bang Fair (And it was big.) After assembly we all had to go toilet because it was going to be a LONG journey, We all had to where  ta bards to keep safe, then we set off. We got set up into little groups of 5 or 4 , we were all organised, we all got our packed lunches and went out of the school one behind the other. we went to Tottenham Hale and  from there to the overground train to Stanford, it was very scary walking right next to the train track but luckily we stayed safe and we all went to stand next to the wall. From Stanford we too the DLR to Excel and the DLR was so scary, it didn’t even have a driver. Me and Aiden were looking at the map and we saw that there was a chocolate event 2(and I’m guessing that everyone wanted to go to it.) After, we got off the DLR we walked a little bit and we finally reached the outstanding  Big Band fair and we all jumped up and down.

we all looked around, we were all shocked of how big it was and so hungry. It was very hard for us to keep controlled,you never know,someone could get something out of there bag and eat. Its not as easy as it sounds,do you know what its like having to walk right next to a Subway shop and smell the food coming from it. Subway is my favorite restaurant. When we all found a place to sit we all got a access all areas pass and we went into the fair.When we got in there were so many fun things to do but our group saw a Jeep so we took a picture.Then we saw everyone crouding around a little, fake race track. What you have to do is wait for all the lights to turn of and then hit the button that will start the cars. When everyone had a turn we all split  up into our groups again and went different ways. Our group found  the chocolate event first and we lined up. When it was my turn I was laughing so much. What you had to do was, melt the chocolate by rubbing it gently on the wine bottle full of steaming hot water. Then you would have to get the two milky way bars you had melted and stick them together so they looked like a right angle. Then you do the same, so that when your finished you should have a box.When we moved on you would get your box of chocolate and weigh it, My one went up to 10 weights. The best part was, when your chocolate box broke, you got to eat it.MMMMMMM!

We did lots more amazing things that are really hard to explain, but I do know that we finally got to eat. Everyone found a seat and we all got out our packed lunches, everyone had so much food and there wasn’t even a bin in site so I told Mr Sloan and he said to go round with a tiny plastic bag. after everyone had ate , we all felt pretty full.

For our final event we all went to the theater that was based on Wallace and Grommet and before we went to the actual theatre a lady was explaining about the kind of things Wallace and Grommet is about. then she told us about a steam train we were going to get in a  goodie bag in the theatre. When we got into the theatre we all took a seat. The show began, I was getting a little bit board when… they said they needed a teacher volunteer, and guess who, that’s right Mr Sloan and another lady who we don’t no.  They had to dance in front of the wholeBig Bang audience.

I hoped you liked my recount and I hope you go to the Big Bang fair because it is very fun and you can learn alot to. Please tell your friends and family about it because you might be able to go.

7 comments

  1. yusra says:

    Cheyenne I really like your work I wish I could write like you Cheyenne.

  2. Owin says:

    Well done Cheyenne This recount about the big gand event was awsome. I wish I could go there

  3. Maxine Pattison says:

    Cheyenne, What a great recount! I can see how much you got out of the day. I really enjoyed the trip too and the only disappointment was we could not find Brian Cox, although he was there because he was on TV at lunchtime that day from the Big Bang Show. I also saw that the One Show was filmed there this week too!

  4. daniel says:

    Cheyenne I like your introduting paraghrah.
    I like the way you use paragrarahs for diffrent things unlike some people.
    I like your last paraghrah were you tryed to purswaed people to go there
    I found a little mistake after we went on the over ground train to stratford we went on the Jubble line .

  5. shakeem1 says:

    WOW Cheyenne thats really good and its very descriptive.

    Keep up the good work.

  6. charlene says:

    Cheyenne wow! This is amazing work I like the way you set it out neatly and it is very clear to read. You did a great job but you need to check over your work because somethings don’t make sense.

  7. Jozef says:

    Cheyenne brillant start at your beautiful work it is so good I can say that you remembered the trip.

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